Tuesday, January 20, 2009

iNSPiRED...

BY THiS GUY RiGHT HERE...
so here's the word :
his name's travis but i like to call him "old man"..lol
he's probably one of the most amazing people you could have the
chance to meet. He's inspired me to do more with the stuff i write and also
givin me the privalge to read his. he's pretty amazing .. see for yourself.
you read it TOP-BOTTOM..then BOTTOM-TOP
Goodnight.
Her eyes shut
she leaves reality for her dreams
this world's pain is enough
it seems
no more pain no more troubles
no more; no more's
she rebuttles
the night's presence looms
it strains
she has no more room
day's troubles consume her
she finally cracks
click.....
ring....
ring.....
ring
He calls
so torn
so young so soon
so dumb
she can't fight him
she loves him
in fact
it was 'them'
so torn
again
so young
again
so soon again
so dumb
heard over; and over
people's talk
she couldnt get around
why me she yells
why me ...lingers
his voice his touch
his emotion
his ..
her devotion
his ...he has none
but at 16 then
who if anyone could blame him remains thin
his 'love'
her trust
them as a coupleled to the above
than
connects the dots
he's not there love amounts she waits for him
his locker
everyday
like
will it be the day
as she enters school
arrives with dismay
no call no text
no him
Wakes from her slumber
The Sun.
Good Morning.

5 comments:

  1. good shit..
    oh
    yeah..
    i found ur blog..
    so ima follow..
    read mine too..
    see u later..

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  2. that was ill. I love how it made perfect sense both ways .

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  3. i was browsing thru blogs came across yours. i love poems so i decided 2 read.... str8 FIYAHHHH. he ripped it post more post more lol

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